I like this
Us sitting beside the window, having coffee and listening to the birds?
Not just that, but also the way we are talking
You smiled a little, “what do you mean?”
Usually when we talk, alone or not alone, your voice is deep, concrete, confident. Right now, it’s different, its tender and on edge. I like it, its soft, as if trying not to disturb the singing of the birds.
You said nothing; just smiled delicately and looked into my void eyes.
Then we both gazed outside and uttered no word.
I call this vague right now because to a reader, this extract is vague. It has no concrete background, characters or a plot line. I am not sure whether this is final piece or not, I will try to have background and all the elements for this extract but if I can’t, I will keep it the same. Please do comment any suggestions and edits! I appreciate them a lot!
Daily Prompt Challenge: Vague